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MissElaney 20th Oct 2017, 1:05 AM

Nice reaction panel of shock. I don't have the same knack for expressions. Also what a bitch is Emma that she can't break up in person! Lord.
MK_Wizard 20th Oct 2017, 1:12 AM

Yeah, that was the idea I was going for.
AmeliaP 21st Oct 2017, 2:50 AM

She broke with him by a phone call?!? Ice cold, man!
Matt Comics 20th Nov 2017, 4:28 PM
Matt Comics

Poor Jekyll, he's really a butt monkey isn't he. I like his hairstyle, btw.

The phone cord in panel 3 is a bit distracting. Maybe the part that got lost in the background should have been colored white/light grey instead. Not a big deal though.

Speaking of colors I really like your use of colored bubbles. It looks way better than usual bubbles with a white background like that, and it kinda gives each character their own voice.
MK_Wizard 20th Nov 2017, 7:31 PM

Thanks. I am actually redoing the first three chapters sort of for reasons like this.
Eckman 26th Sep 2018, 2:21 AM

Hey MK_WIZARD - Not sure why I didn't realize this until now, but you have a comic, too! Already so much drama... that's great! Looking forward to reading more soon!
MK_Wizard 26th Sep 2018, 7:04 AM

Looking forward to your commentary.
BitterBadger 23rd Sep 2020, 3:30 PM

That second to last panel just kills me. Brings some unpleasant dating memories back, having to say "I understand" all the while wanting to ask for a second chance.
MK_Wizard 23rd Sep 2020, 3:31 PM

I have seen these things way too often myself.
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